T1+Persuade

L.I. We are learning make content relevant and add weight to argument by having an effective position statement, main points, evidence and restatement. Contain elaboration of main points.E ffective position statement:S.C. we can
 * Make our position and purpose clear
 * Use a rhetorical question
 * Include a list of fact/evidence that will be discussed in writing

Restatement, elaboration of main points: S.C. We Can
 * Restate my position throughout my writing
 * Make a main point and back it up with evidence or statistics

__14 March 2011__ Extended Mourning Tea  Tauranga Intermediate 30 18th Avenue Tauranga   Dear Mr Diver Last Friday you gave us an extended mourning tea. I believe that we should continue this for every Friday. It would be a great reward for getting back to class faster. When you were a kid you would of wonted this reward to wouldn’t you? I believe that we should keep this up because normally the kids wont rush back to class but if they know that they will get a reward for it then they will. If we do this every Friday then the kids will be encouraged and will back to class fast to keep getting the reward on Friday’s and it will also make Friday’s even better. I believe that this is a great idea and also all the other kids think it is to. It will also be good for the teachers as well. They would like having a bit of extra time as well for just relaxing or marking some work. If you do this then I bet that the teachers will be just as thankful as the kids will be. The reason why is because they will get more time to relax or sort out work. If you do do this then the extended mourning tea would also be good because us kids need more fresh air before being stuck in class again. If we can then I think most kids will act better to because they would have let all there energy out at mourning tea because they get longer to. This would be great for Friday's and kids will really appreciate it. So this is why we should have a extended mourning tea on Friday’s for our reward. We would all really appreciate it and be very thank full. Yours Sincerely Taylor Peddle 

__**Against Nuclear Resistors**__

Having Nuclear Power is wrong! Would you rather kill people or have cheaper power? Did you know that in Chernobyl thousands of people have died from the wind catching some of the Nuclear Power and the wind carries it to Chernobyl and people breath it then they will eventually die from it. Nuclear Reactors are also a prime target for terrorists.I believe that New Zealand should never have Nuclear Power. So would you rather kill people or have cheap power?

Nuclear Power provides a lot of deadly toxic waste. Just in the United states they have produced 49,000 metric tones of deadly toxic waste. Then if you think about that that is only one country. Burying it is not safe because containers can corrode and toxic waste can seep through into the soil and maybe water. In japan right at the moment that is a great example of why we shouldn’t have Nuclear Power. There have been thousands of life's lost in japan because of this. Japan thought that it would be safe because it was built well but in any country that have Nuclear Reactors a natural disaster could happen at any moment and have to worry even more about these Nuclear Reactors going of and millions of people will die.

There have been around about 200 Nuclear melt down near missies in the United States and that’s just one country. Imagine how many there would be in the whole world. I think that it would be to dangerous to have it New Zealand and I would hate it if one came here. The Nuclear Power Plants could take out one third of the worlds water supple altogether and the world already doesn’t have much water supple. They provide 25-30 tones of waste each year and with no safe way to

So would you rather have more people die in New Zealand or have cheaper electricity? I know that I would rather save people then have cheaper electricity. So altogether I think that New Zealand should never have Nuclear Power and that we would be a lot safer without it in our country.